Introduction

One of my resources indicated some doubt about whether this verse belongs in the Dao De Jing. The oldest version (circa 400 BCE) is considerably shorter and different than the version from circa 150 BCE. The 150 BCE version is pretty close to the main version (circa 250 CE). The fact that it is present in some form in the oldest text is a hint that it does belong. Further, I believe it follows the previous verse well and fits the textual framework overall. That said, the last few lines are very obscure, and I’m not fully settled in my understanding of them. 

Now feels like an appropriate time to remind readers that this project has two distinct parts. In the translation, I seek to faithfully render the verses of the Dao De Jing into English through interpretive translation. Interpretive translation means conveying the total experience of reading the text through the target language (English). If you’re interested in getting literal, the Chinese Text Project is an invaluable resource for analyzing the text character by character. 

The second part is a commentary on what this verse means to me regarding meditative living. The commentary intends to provide direct teachings that support your understanding of the verse and your meditative lifestyle. More importantly, however, it stimulates your inquiry into what it means to Weave the Way.

Translation

Excellent force
  is a tool of ill omen.
Phenomenon dislikes it,
  therefore desire does not claim it.

The Wise claim to cherish the left.
The Forceful cherish the right.

The ominous tool of coercion
  is not the Wise’s method.
The Wise only use it as needed,
  favoring a sharp strike.

Coercion is not commendable.
One who considers coercion praiseworthy
  is one who delights in violence.

One who delights in violence
  is unable to succeed in the World. 

Prosperity favors the left.
Ferocity favors the right.

At a funeral,
  the First Mate is on the left
    and the Capitan is on the right.

Mass destruction
  a flood of bitter tears
    victory is a rite of mourning.

Commentary

Excellent force
  is a tool of ill omen. 

This verse continues to discuss the role of force in the life of a Weaver of the Way. Remember that force is “inflicting or forcing something on someone.” Also, remember that these verses simultaneously discuss our internal processes and our external behaviors. 

Getting really good at using force isn’t something Weavers of the Way should be proud of. However, the Wise are also really good at it! We will get into that in a few stanzas.